#Pacing

Jon B. ✨KawaiiGuy✨

Pacing is often overlooked, but easily the most important aspect of any creator's work.You do not need to be fast-paced or aggressive to maintain audience attention.Allow your audience to breathe.Allow

I will tweet some highlights from @KayKenyon 's class on pacing this morning with the hashtag #paceyourself We always start by talking about what has brought ppl to the class.

Time to start Berseria Really enjoyed the cast and the world. The combat was horribly annoying at the begging (Did they really need to make fucking Zagi aka "Permastun psycho"

Let's talk about Alfonso Cuaron's masterpiece called Children of Men (1/4):This is a dystopian story where children are no longer being born for the past 18 years. This is a

Frances Gilbert

I've been reading a ton of picture book manuscript lately and it has me thinking about word count, which is an issue I know comes up a lot and causes

Joie (Jump & Shoot Podcast)

Major gripes with FFVII:R- Linearity is fine; the almost Uncharted-esque, claustrophobic areas are not. I just want the game to open up a bit- The Nomura shit in the story

an easily-diagnosable problem i often see in manuscripts is when the action of the plot isn't evenly spread and there's a clear imbalance in the pacing. the solution to figuring

The Duke of Evil || BLM

I was hoping for the discourse to die down on The Last of Us II so I can say my peace. Ultimately, it's a very emotionally draining experience with some

Given all of the ongoing change & uncertainty in schools, I’m seeing a big push toward standardization in grading, curriculum, pacing, etc.Much of this standardization is being framed for “equity,”

Ok so recently i’ve been wanting to write a thread about my thoughts on Tower of god since i’ve recently caught up. Im really bad at gathering my thoughts and

Gordon Emmanuel

Thread Alert... Great article. I will just touch on a sentiment that continues to arise in many of these pieces about Force Design. That being, “what about the other contingencies

So yeah. Thoughts on BNA. Might be spoilery but I'll try to keep that at a minimumI was already planning on watching this before several people (yes, that includes you

Shout out to @seltty who asked me to compare my experience Rage of Dragons by Evan Winter with my experience reading the Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan (I

Susanna 🕷️

wondering if any other autistic/adhd people experience a very long lead up to any project...like unrelated stuff, pacing around, imagining things, listening to music, etc then just suddenly one day

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One piece arc ratings so farA thread : East Blue arc (Ep 1-61):Rating: 7.5/10I enjoyed this arc but the pacing of it was painfully slow at times and Luffy was

I use the phrase "narrative momentum" in a lot of rejections for submissions to F&SF. As in "for me this needed more narrative momentum" or "the narrative lost momentum for