Some work on the Historic Environment WW1 for the Edexcel GCSE - incorporating @JudithCHochman Writing Revolution principles. This is from my second 'lesson' (in reality it'll take longer than a single one hour lesson) on the Context of the Western Front and key battle

Adding details to go with topic sentences

Writing different types of topic sentences

Sentence Expansion (x2)

Forming complex sentences

Matching up details to go with the appropriate topic sentence

@MrThorntonTeach this'll be right up your street I'd imagine...