update on the song i& #39;m working on: intro + verse fairly locked in. might do the classic and drop in a weird PSA from the past at the start. lyrics and vocal melody are placeholders

influenced by a cave weddings song I saw in a jay reatard memorial video. https://soundcloud.com/old_hands/real-soon-sketch-2-dif-riff">https://soundcloud.com/old_hands...
vocal mix is so off right now too. I can& #39;t seem to get what I& #39;m looking for, so tips and feedback welcome
https://soundcloud.com/old_hands/real-soon-5th-cut

it& #39;s">https://soundcloud.com/old_hands... getting more song-y now. Still needs more direction and some love. probably going to use the current verse as a chorus? idk. this is the most i& #39;ve worked on a song since the first album lol.
Added some plugins and fifth harmony of ~the riff~ in the chorus. https://soundcloud.com/old_hands/real-soon-7th-cut">https://soundcloud.com/old_hands...
figured out a prechorus and nuked the vocals because i fiddled with the plugins too much and hate the lyrics. https://soundcloud.com/old_hands/real-soon-eighth-cutno-vocals">https://soundcloud.com/old_hands...
forgot to post 9th cut. Here is 10th cut. It has a prechorus and verse 1 lyrics. If you& #39;re sick of me posting this, so am I and I wish it was just done but life doesn& #39;t work that way, sport https://soundcloud.com/old_hands/real-soon-10th-cut">https://soundcloud.com/old_hands...
oooookay. watched this video and got inspired for my own thing. what if we started taking stuff away? and switching to more acoustic but still reverby. and slow down the pace a little? less frantic. a bit of a left turn but hmmmm.... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6s96rMcrHXY">https://www.youtube.com/watch...
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