ongoing thread of larry fanfiction ratings

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1. i sleep naked by uniquelyxlarry (wattpad) ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
i think this story was honestly awful. there was so much about it that was problematic (representing way too many real issues incorrectly), the writing was poor, and the relationship was pretty toxic.
2. there’s such a lot of world to see by crinkle-eyed-boo (ao3) ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
this book was AMAZING. it was heart wrenching and i cried, but it was beautiful and had a happy ending despite the emotional rollercoaster. it was creative and interesting too, i loved it.
3. painless by larrystylinson (wattpad)
★ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
this story was just boring. it was short, the ending tried to be really emotional but i just found i didn’t care. it wasn’t problematic, just really, really boring, and not great writing quality.
4. blue ice by purpledandelion (ao3)
★ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
this story was pretty toxic. harry was kind of the cliche asshole forgiven when he shouldn’t be after being so emotionally and mentally abusive. the writing quality was decent but the story itself was problematic.
5. flightless bird (ao3)
★ ★ ★ ★ ☆
i didn’t like this story at first because it’s in 1st person; time jumps around, and it wasn’t the BEST quality, but it grew on me a lot i got really attached to the characters, loved the plot, and was really into it by the end
6. room 317 by Lellsy (wattpad)
★ ★ ★ ★ ☆
i loved ALMOST everything about this story, except that sometimes it would go on and on with side plots i couldn’t care less about (like just giving too much info on side characters, side povs) and skipped time in places i’d+
rather it didn’t, and was SO frustrating at first. but i think it was an overall good story, good writing, so i definitely approve.
7. sometimes we break so beautiful (ao3) by Joydilouis86
★ ★ ★ ☆ ☆
the plot of this book was kinda weird but like fine, definitely unique. at first i thought the writing was really good, but as it went on it felt like the classic “how can i write this in any way besides +
the normal way” especially when it came to smut. it really felt written by a FANFIC writer versus a book writer. it was alright tho i’m not mad at it. it did the annoying thing being in liam’s or zayn’s pov and i DO NOT WANT THAT so it could be really boring at parts too
8. the dead things we carry (ao3) by MediaWhore
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
short and simple, but BEAUTIFUL. the writing was gorgeous, i was intrigued the whole time and just sat and read it all in one sitting. it was a sweet love story with some sadness mixed in but overall so good ❤️
9. loving you is free (ao3) by littlelouishiccups
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
very smutty/kinky if you aren’t into that be aware but i think it’s really well written, adorable, fun, sweet, just an overall good time i love stories like this.
10. who painted the moon black (ao3) by throughthedark
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
i loooooved this it was emotional but ends so beautifully and just was really well written and i cared about all the characters and ahhhh i don’t usually read aus like this but i love love loved it
don’t you think it’s boring how people talk? (ao3) by wildestdreams
★ ★ ★ ★ ☆
this was another au and it was pretty good, but i think because gossip girl is 6 seasons and this is one short book it felt rushed and not as epic as blaire and chuck’s love story
12. reunion (wattpad) by TPWLarry
★ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
i was going to give this book 2 stars because it’s pretty poor writing and i the plot of it being like “real life” and not an au i’m not a fan of, but it wasn’t awful, but towards the end they started being kinda sexist tbh+
and blaming women in louis and harry’s lives for awful things and this book is meant to be like a real life one direction reunion so painting those real people in such awful ways is kinda harmful in my opinion
13. and then a bit (ao3) by infinitelymint
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
i don’t usually like canon compliant stuff but this was written really well and i actually really liked it
14. walk that mile (ao3) by purpledaisy
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
i ADORE this fic so much. it’s adorable. a nice slow burn almost enemies to lovers that is just so cute and sweet and lovely and i just am in love with this fic yeah
15. right by your side (ao3) by mezziedemo
★ ★ ★ ☆ ☆
this book was alright. it was written decently. i didn’t really like the concept of like a therapist and his patient getting together cause that’s a lil problematic, but some other fics are WAY worse so eh
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