I gotta say, and I know other Star Wars writers agree— @pablohidalgo gives some of theeeee best, most thoughtful, creative, and often hilarious and always wise editorial notes I've ever gotten. He is a gift.

I'm cackling because while normal writers have words they accidentally include too much, I apparently have a subconscious affinity for Ithorians and poor @missingwords, also a terrific feedback giver, had to be like "Um isn't this like the 12th rando Ithorian walking by sir"

Dugs are actually my sentient creature of choice but I know that so I go out of my way to not overrepresent them and choose my Dug usage wisely. Ithorians I guess I just toss in there for the hell of it oops.

(I also have words I monstrously overuse like a regular people writer)

ahaha found it, my random overuse word: https://twitter.com/djolder/status/1074111669800976389?s=20

why daniel. why