My mutuals, my lovelies, my pride, my fellow creators. Lend me your... eye, technically. Thread time about a project of mine.

The way I have my sci-fantasy, post-apoc setting? The one where Dana hails from? I& #39;m not sure if I like the direction I took it in thus far.
However, I& #39;m not feeling a hard reset either. There& #39;s not a lot of hard stuff that& #39;s been created thus far. Only a few rewritten chapters of an unfinished novelette.

Maybe I& #39;m in the "Midgar chapters" of Apocalypse Fox / Moon Fall. Literally so, within a dystopian city.
I believe that a story should grab readers, players, watchers, etc from the get-go. I also don& #39;t believe hard worldbuilding works for me, either. Rather than define endless amounts of lore, I& #39;d rather tell character-driven tales that develop and expand upon lore over time.
The tl;dr of Apoc-Fox as it exists right now are thus.

Mutant fox-girl lives in village. World is overgrown. Skid friend saw werewolf employers eat coworker, and fears he& #39;s next. Vixen slips into workplace, finds info.

There& #39;s more to the story, but nothing finished.
Apoc-Fox started as a solitaire tabletop RPG campaign. I had used the game to help me tell a story. The bits I& #39;d finished of the first tale, "Wolf of Dead Streets", are from lost tabletop sessions that I recall.

I don& #39;t think it tells enough of what I wanted of the setting.
The characters? That& #39;s the opposite.

From the first drafts I& #39;d shared on my writing blog, you get a great idea of who Dana, the titular Apocalypse Fox, is. You get an okay picture of the junkie Tom (AKA Prowler), and of the ex-merc Eric. The supporting cast is dece, too.
So, what& #39;s the point of this thread?

I need help deciding on where to go next. I don& #39;t have the first story finished. There is so much gonzo apocalyptia I& #39;d like to unveil. Plenty of character concepts. Insight into what happened during the cataclysm.
...in the end, I& #39;d better keep writing. Question is, should I try a side-story for now? Something shorter? Or should I trudge through finishing the first draft?

Again, I feel like Lock City is my Midgar. Doesn& #39;t mean that& #39;s all there is to it.

Also, I want a 00& #39;s vibe. >_>
You can follow @racheltheseeker.
Tip: mention @twtextapp on a Twitter thread with the keyword “unroll” to get a link to it.

Latest Threads Unrolled: