#kuroreads wicked fang by ao3 user fatal

https://archiveofourown.org/works/25872283 

I’m trying something new sorry for ruining words with highlights but WORDS PRETTY. The entire sequence is so amazing how vivid his dream shapes before our eyes. And as an introduction to his character.
we begin with fear. with vulnerability. with our so called mad dog being chased ( before he morphs ) and even up to the point he wakes... that last line. lies down gently. also love the caps for the first line. all i could imagine was weirdly hades & cerberus
yeah yeah if u were wondering this paragraph made me click home button + sleep/wake button and began this whole thread. how can i not?? the descriptions of his views on his fellow teammates just chef kisses. kindaichi’s eagerness and kunimi’s seeming aloofness. how kentaro
can tell with a single glance it’s a mask. gotta lie down ( strokes kunimi gently. it’s okay bb you don’t always have to conceal, don’t feel. )
HELP. SEND HELP. I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO CUT THIS PART HELP. TWO SECTIONS IN AND IM THIRD EYE PERMANENTLY OPEN ( how dare u make kei this hot elo. how dare i can’t live like this i’m. how dare u make me face what i’ve been repressing?? )
highlighted section broke me ( in a good way ) but before my brain goes haywire... love this section. love the reflection of past and how it seamlessly is woven into the present through an analysis of the individuals around him ( and kentaro’s relationship with them ). the
similarities and contrast between kei and akira ( starts crying ). like sure apathy as a currency but it’s also just accepting each other as is? not intrusive. not trying to dig or change each other. that’s nice. ( i refuse for make further comments on hot kei ) the dialogue 👌👌
how many breakdowns will i have of 2d boys before this is over. but 1) the set up to bridge what comes next 2) they looked where kentaro looked, where everyone’s always looked. 3) the last two paragraphs. again. vulnerability which bridges the next section i
BREATHES INTO A PAPER BAG. as i was saying. vulnerability. desires exposed in dreams. ITS JUST KEI. JUST KEI IN AN EMPTY LANDSCAPE COMPARED TO THE HOUNDS TEARING INTO HIM EARLIER ( still tearing into him. just more gentle. without fangs and teeth. with a voice curled around the
shell of his ear and a palm on the curve of his mouth and somehow. somehow. it feels more raw than skin tearing from flesh. no i’m not okay. i’ll happily die by this kei’s hands alone )
ready to lose started playing and all my brain can think about is: “You’ve composed me. You are always composing me, Kyoutani-san.”

on a scale of one to ten how bad will my heart ache after this?
is it an elo fic if i don’t screenshot the entire fic and throw it on here. seriously please mute this thread. i avoided twitter so i could enjoy this fic in its entirety without accidentally reading other people’s comments and excerpts from this piece but OH MY GOD
desires taking a physical manifestation isn’t quite the right phrase because this is still his dreamscape? but kei’s incessant “What are you making me do to you?” sharp as a knife. slicing through and laying kentaro’s desires out in the open like two halves of an apple. oxidation
about to take place soon. there’s no going back after this. THE DONT LOOK AWAY. HOW THE CRUELNESS OF KEI IS MORE REMINISCENT OF THE YOUNGER HIGH SCHOOL KEI I AM SCREECHING

[ If Kei is only a mirage, he’s the cruelest Kentaro’s ever dreamt. ]

goodbye me
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