Oh right, i was thinking earlier how to even structure a shuuen anime, cuz how do you give justice to a series like shuuen which is like how it is
Uh
It's not gonna be a 12 ep format lol
OP as shogeki react or uh ketsuraku recode or repeatragedy
one of them
up for rearranging
I think a-ya is a good starting point, he'd introduce everyone cuz he's the reason everyone's there in the first place, establish occult club, rumors and the story of 10 years ago. End the ep with starting kokkuri San

Ending theme e-noru centered
(As a bonus, include e-noru in frames, looking at occult club, but not interacting, just there)

2nd ep, a-ya and his buddy who reads the letter and watch occult club go into hysterics heehee, on the scenes of a-ya being a burrito, there's the sense of TV static

E-noru lurks
3, a-ya and kudoku kakurenbo heehee he has a terrible time, the rabbit suffers and for now, we can't see who wrecks a-ya

Ending is kudoku kakurenbo for this ep
4, ep starts with rewind in the corner, we run back to the kokkuri San game following b-ko. She goes through it, and she's slowly losing it. We see different frames of her, her (cute) expressions that flutter past like photos in a gallery app
Ends in the library
End song nisemono
5, HEEHEE DB CHAN TIME, e-noru visible in the corner of the library but its DB smooch before d-ne yeets away. B-ko gets book and letter, we get KERCHACK X500, and the faint scent of osmanthus and a tale of mirrors that don't align
"A-ya..."

End song re:parallel
6, rewind just before the game, for c-ta d-ne "we're alike" convo,c-ta suffer cuz a-ya doesnt remember the bun. We see burrito a-ya but then zooms out to c-ta's cameras and his silhouette The book in vanishes, the red moon and black cat appear
Fade to black
End re:missed call
7, the news reports a-ya is no longer there, c-ta's call to b-ko, c-ta wondering what happened, and reminiscing on his shared past with a-ya
Someone who is good at c-ta add more stuff here lol
C-ta Later Remembers and yeah
Ends with another news report, e-noru watches
End pcll
8, rewind, but further. ALL the way back we starting with baby d-ne and ririka. Fast forward scenes: we get b-ko helping d-ne and the sound of heartbeats, d-ne tailing b-ko to occult building,d-ne/c-ta grumpy convo, and clip to the game
"The one I like is b-ko chan"
End, sns song
9, library redux cuz GoOD. And d-ne falling down her Personal Rabbit Hole with the paw, eventually gets to KERCHACK X500 redux
"A-ya...."
"I will. Protect you b-ko chan~"
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"Oh, b-ko chan did you change your shampoo?"
"Isn't it wonderful?"
"No, i hate it"
End, aim chairs
10, e-noru and the hospital, echoing footsteps, beepin of the ekg, room 1713 and scent of things too clean, the newscaster audio reporting about the events of the game
"Uncle. Another week and you haven't woken up, huh? Looks like those guys messed up again..."
End, common heroes
11a, slow fade into static and a zoom out into stacks of TVs, showing diff parts of the loop, newscaster voice "you've heard the rules haven't you? They didn't find the fox so the game isn't over yet" Points a remote at the TV and it rewinds and we in for loop 2
End, repeatragedy
11b, we're in loop 2, so we'll start from the kokkuri San, again Mob chan sees the letter in d-ne's locker and b-ko sees it, mob chan has a terrible time and d-ne is LOSING it. We get the picture gallery of new b-ko pics but also the increased zoom of mob chan outside the window
11c d-ne has a terrible time but is Trying her best to keep b-ko chan safe
We get sad library scene of sadness and start of d-ne's kudoku kakurenbo
And ends like it usually does
End, koigokoro underwater
12, c-ta, doppelganger time, we have the c-ta d-ne shrine chat this time and c-ta's cameras going like "wtf is happening in a-ya's room who's there"
And he loses too
End, dramatic showcase
13, b-ko, mearry san, why she was at the library and what she didn't find, and sad scene again
And even if everything is done right, it still goes bad
E-noru is around in places here
End, honmono chuuihou
14, a-ya and monkey paw, watches how everyone slowly vanishes, his library trip, collecting the paw
"As I suspected the real traitor if this game is..."
(I forgot, this line at the end of the loop 2 eps)
End, 一人ノ独占会
15, the tv clicks on, we're with newscaster, and everyone's in the ROOM e-noru is on another screen being sad/lonely,
We get the convo of who the fox is, occult club points at gay ppl.
E-noru then LOSES IT on the other screen
"Shouganaina? YOU'RE KIDDING ME. How long has it been?
15b, "Next time, you'll SEE!! You think it's me, huh? I'll show you. "
(This is just me vibing)
Screens click off, but the ekg sound echoes and faint laughter
"Well then little e-noru, let's see how well you do while your uncle's dreaming away.~"
End, ryokiteki high school life
It's film club turn but oh no im not good at film club, eps 16 forward will be them but uh.
My film club game weak as ever h I'll have to think up stuff or have Help tm
16, e-ki centered, meets club, a transition that acts like a film reel, with the year 1999 in the corner. E-ki "only Good thing about me is my energy!~" the building looks better, newer and the tech is older, the idea of film is out there for culture festival!
End, bokutachi days
17, the "don't do things differently than the dream" e-ki carrying the sense of unease but everyone's fine, right? Let's focus on making a fun film! But content is hard, until we get c-na suggestion of a New Rumor Thing
(I am prolly wrong in many parts here lol)
End, threse sigh
18, a-no, mentions of the TREE, her filming b-ko role and kudoku kakurenbo (wait is this the right rumor? It's been a minute) a-no relationships w everyone else
End, fighting girl
19, b-ka, has a bit on his ghost and e-ki helping him so he can record well, and WOW he plays a-ya so well no one can believe it since he's so cute,
E-ki is everyone's anchor huh
End, yasashii obakebanashi
20, c-na, love of rumors, Insp for the new story, filming her part as d-ne, (why doesnt she get along w a-no ;v;) finding new stories to use and otherwise soft moments
End, nostalgia junk food
21, d-suke, snacc boi, cameraman until he plays c-ta with the paw, e-ki voice "WOW D-SUKE! You did great!" Cromnch the chip d-suke
(Help im so weak on film club)
End, himitsuya san
Okay upon visiting film clubs chapters properly, my order us terribly incorrect HOWEVER this order can stay, since memories can get shuffled and swapped around in the timing. I also missed the week of rumor but this can also be acceptable
Our window is unreliable after all
22, the movie filmed, e-ki is bothered, the forgotten dream creates unease, don't leave him alone, the bell that signals the conclusion draws closer
Without the ending the story won't end, ignorance policy eats at the time, 3 days and it's game over
E-ki still can't decide
22b, the first film successful, the festival a success! night falls, the end draws closer, the cat in the box turns the moon red
You unfilmed boy, make up your mind, you must have an ending or one will be made for you
End, game and girls
23, the heartbeat quickens, those stories were fake, right? Just for thrills, for fun, for having friends and happy days, your dawn arrives and nothing has changed. Unknown stress piles behind that cheery smile, and despite that the cafe succeeds!
A night meeting with everyone
23b, how to end the story, who is the fox, a long lasting conversation, the creeping desperation and franticness of writing, nothing works nothing works nothing works nothing works nothing works nothing works nothing works nothing works the TV's click on, endless screens
23c, "dear E, the ending won't change" but maybe. There's a chance that it will. An impossible game with impossible rules who's to say that an impossible ending doesn't exist?
End, Nagareru Hoshi ni Negau
Yeah game and girls def doesnt fit there despite my wanting it to swap to heibonna nichijou
24, an e-noru episode. Perhaps the E was meant to be e, a tale not meant for e-ki to solve. And when paradoxes like traveling cassettes from the future can reach the past, a hopeful light can still draw a whimsical new [ending]
24b, the old journal found, the story falls into place, "let's play the game, one more time" familiar words and familiar gears turn. A bored sigh expecting the outcome seen hundreds of times before.
The anomaly e throws the wrench in the cogs
"Look carefully here this's not done"
24c, "this story's a script but e-ki never got to finish it. Before we do that let's try this first. I want to write something that would make him happy" the screen shakes and it sounds like it was hit.
An illogical wish for a time long gone, but something small can create waves
24d, if a cassette tape can jump times, then so too can a script, it just has to work once, and the spell can break, an endless repeatragedy no more.
"Good morning uncle, it's been a while"
"Uhhn... guys? E-noru?"
"Mm."
24e,"Guys?"
"Good morning e-ki, we're here too. Didn't know you were such a sleepy head. Hope you had some good dreams"
"No way I thought...you were..."
"We're okay! See?"
We get a happy end bc i say so and everyone's ALIVE, AND news guy suffers in the void
End, Heibonna Nichijou
Can't remember if I used that song already but this is my take on how to structure this
Is it feasible? Or practical? NOPE BUT MY CITY NOW
AW HECK I used it already, might swap the first one for different songs OR use different versions heibonna hm hm hm
I do wanna use either/or ketsuraku recode or repeatragedy and ketsumasu yumelody somewhere but that's for when I look at the Whole Thread tm
And when I have more than 1 braincell
Imma redo the end songs for film side cuz they def don't feel too good rn
And if anyone has ideas of things to change that'd be something cool to chat about
i think i'd have to mildly restructure eps 16 forward to accommodate the Actual Events, but i still do wanna keep the Ea'b'c'd'E kinda ordering that i had here, and prolly do it w a song list beside me so i could. cross out the ones i'd already used hrhrhr, (no doppelganger ends
I thought about this thread again and i might wannna introduce a 3rd new loop that discovers a better ending w increased e-noru OR even COMPLETELY deviating from loops 1 and 2 w occult club (cuz tbh its just a rehash and that's less fun to watch) and replace w a loop w e-noru
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