You reckon it’s okay to spend like 30,000 out of 150,000 words of epic fantasy novel having like REALLY hot explicit sex with like elf princes and dwarf warlords and stuff
It’s still very, very potty, but also SEX
It’s still very, very potty, but also SEX
Oh my god, PLOTTY
PLOTTY, not POTTY
PLOTTY, not POTTY
God I regret everything
Whether or not this all belongs in the book, I’m writing it. I’m 70% sure I want to edit the book to be appropriate for mature teens - somewhere between Kushiel’s Dart and An Ember in the Ashes. So I will likely edit it all out (or seriously truncate it, close that door).