Right, so. @Cheap_Pop opens for submissions on MONDAY, JUNE 1. 500 words or less. #MakeItPop
Here’s a thread of stories I love, and what made them stand out for me. (Obv I
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Here’s a thread of stories I love, and what made them stand out for me. (Obv I
“Something Between Them” by @kbcarle:
What I love about this one is that it gets your attention. The first line—“A knife lies between the woman and the mouse”—hooks you. When you write flash, every sentence needs to be precise, knife-sharp. http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019/1/6/something-between-them-kb-carle">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019...
What I love about this one is that it gets your attention. The first line—“A knife lies between the woman and the mouse”—hooks you. When you write flash, every sentence needs to be precise, knife-sharp. http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019/1/6/something-between-them-kb-carle">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019...
“Be Conscious of Form” by @_minimeme
I love this one for a similar reason. Every word is chosen so carefully. This story moves poetically.
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I love this one for a similar reason. Every word is chosen so carefully. This story moves poetically.
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Speaking of stories that move poetically, I
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“There is a wolf in my city and I have seen her in the walls of my apartment.”
I was obsessed w/ this story from the first read. The voice, the urgency. https://bit.ly/3d2ieLx ">https://bit.ly/3d2ieLx&q...
“There is a wolf in my city and I have seen her in the walls of my apartment.”
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I’m a sucker for an end-of-the-world story. But it can’t be run-of-the-mill. That’s why I love “Plastic Animal Handbook” by @nicholls_evan. It’s so strange yet so perfect. Those sections, ugh. That last line!
“The End: Comes at you low. Like in the bush.” https://bit.ly/2XvfHCW ">https://bit.ly/2XvfHCW&q...
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It can difficult to build character, esp. when you only have 500 words. @johnjodzio does it so well, though, in “Cornhole, Bags.”
“The church’s bags board was painted with a glowing face of Jesus and you tossed your beanbag into his grinning mouth.” https://bit.ly/2X2TTjo ">https://bit.ly/2X2TTjo&q...
“The church’s bags board was painted with a glowing face of Jesus and you tossed your beanbag into his grinning mouth.” https://bit.ly/2X2TTjo ">https://bit.ly/2X2TTjo&q...
Flash should be surprising! Like this @Joaqertxranger story. It builds & builds to a devastating end.
“How could they not see it?” http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019/7/28/how-could-you-know-joaquin-fernandez">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2019...
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All right. I’m going for a walk. I’ll add more later! Maybe you could @ me & share your favorite @Cheap_Pop story & why
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Good morning! I’m back. Thinking about stories I love, stories close to my
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It’s early, so here are just a couple:
It’s early, so here are just a couple:
I absolutely adore everything @DinaLRelles writes, especially “Half-Life.” You can feel the heart of piece beating.
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This one’s kind of a deep-dive, but it’s the first story I read that made me fall in love with @Cheap_Pop.
“The Jellyfish” by Zara Lisbon
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“The Jellyfish” by Zara Lisbon
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Some stories don’t even need 500 words. Thinking about this one by @katoscope—how so much can be said in 100 words or less.
“I can feel you touching the world. Your cells and the divinity of them falling apart.” http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2018/7/24/she-paints-it-pyrotechnic-yellow-these-days-kathryn-mcmahon">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2018...
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Some stories ache. “I don’t know what to tell you” by @yaelwouden breaks my heart every time I read it (which, admittedly, is frequently).
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Another fav, “Fragments of Evolution” by @CavinBGonzalez. When I read this, I loved the sections, the voice, how suddenly it gets so intimate.
“That’s how it happened with my best friend. He was a kid. Then he was a man. It took no time at all.” http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017/12/18/fragments-of-evolution-cavin-bryce">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017...
“That’s how it happened with my best friend. He was a kid. Then he was a man. It took no time at all.” http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017/12/18/fragments-of-evolution-cavin-bryce">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017...
Make your story vibrant. DETAILS DETAILS DETAILS. Obsessed with “Mayflies” by @mcarphil
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“Bodies falling inches deep on the roadway, powdery soft like too-cold snow.” http://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017/3/31/mayflies-meghan-phillips">https://www.cheappoplit.com/home/2017...
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Speaking of details...
“To slather is to eradicate the cracks—the smiles the grimaces the worried furrowed brows, even the laughter that throws your head back and unhinges your jaw and splits your once-smooth skin.”
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“To slather is to eradicate the cracks—the smiles the grimaces the worried furrowed brows, even the laughter that throws your head back and unhinges your jaw and splits your once-smooth skin.”
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