I& #39;m told there& #39;s a studio sending out a pilot outline I wrote as an example of a great outline (they didn& #39;t pick up my show, sadly), & I recently wrote an outline & didn& #39;t get notes on it so I& #39;m feeling in the zone w outlining. So if it& #39;s useful, u may reply w outline questions.
Most of what i think makes a great outline, I already talked about in the talk i gave a few weeks ago on coming up w your take on material. But I& #39;ll answer what i can describe (a bit tough in this format) in the hopes of making outlining & this biz a bit more accessible.
My pilot pitch/outline game improved significantly after reading Noah Hawley& #39;s pitch document for FARGO. It& #39;s here at this link with other documents writers wrote to sell hit shows. Check it out. https://www.carolekirschner.com/blog/series-bible">https://www.carolekirschner.com/blog/seri...
If you can dig it up, the 1st season/pilot True Detective pitch doc is also bananas good, obviously for the brilliant structure, but also the sheer astounding level of confidence on the page describing the vision.