This is also me. I can’t write a book until I have the first line. The original first line of WE RIDE THE STORM was:

“It’s harder to sever a head than people think”

...which I loved. So when I had to add a new first chapter in edits I needed AN EVEN BETTER ONE... https://twitter.com/zlikeinzorro/status/1264219100622004224">https://twitter.com/zlikeinzo...
It’s now:

“They tried to kill me four times before I could walk. Seven before I held any memory of the world. Every time thereafter I knew fear, but it was anger that chipped sharp edges into my soul.”

And while the original is important to Rah’s culture, the new one IS Miko
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