This is also me. I can’t write a book until I have the first line. The original first line of WE RIDE THE STORM was:
“It’s harder to sever a head than people think”
...which I loved. So when I had to add a new first chapter in edits I needed AN EVEN BETTER ONE... https://twitter.com/zlikeinzorro/status/1264219100622004224">https://twitter.com/zlikeinzo...
“It’s harder to sever a head than people think”
...which I loved. So when I had to add a new first chapter in edits I needed AN EVEN BETTER ONE... https://twitter.com/zlikeinzorro/status/1264219100622004224">https://twitter.com/zlikeinzo...
It’s now:
“They tried to kill me four times before I could walk. Seven before I held any memory of the world. Every time thereafter I knew fear, but it was anger that chipped sharp edges into my soul.”
And while the original is important to Rah’s culture, the new one IS Miko
“They tried to kill me four times before I could walk. Seven before I held any memory of the world. Every time thereafter I knew fear, but it was anger that chipped sharp edges into my soul.”
And while the original is important to Rah’s culture, the new one IS Miko