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In the past twenty minutes I've drawn a more atomically correct sketch of this piece by @NamiiArts of @A2Rhombus 's Oc
So to start, we're talking anatomy. Someone please tell me if you can sit in the position of the original piece comfortably. You can't. It's uncomfortable to look at and to say the least almost impossible to sit like.
Next is just small pointers to compare the original oc with the piece. You may notice the antlers of the original oc go outward and have no points on the bottom. This could be considered artist creativity but I don't think It looks right. 1/2
The hair is longer then it's supposed to be. Not to mention the tail is not two separate pieces Nami, it's one.
Last is just personal distaste. The eyes don't fit the rest of the style, the proportions are off. Plus the hair is a mess and the piece just looks rushed. This is all said in hopes you can learn to change some. Sure you might say it's just how your style is and it's fine. 1/2
But you can always get better. Until next time - Critiique
