I need to learn what is and isn’t good writing to turn into my English teacher because I almost started writing a short story about a man resurrecting his dead dog and then getting eaten alive in graphic detail for tampering with life before I realized “Maybe that’s too much”

I have submitted a few short stories to her that have a lot of death and murder in them but like hmmm maybe I should calm tf down? Like I think she’s genuinely worried about my sanity when I write about things like a man killing his fiancé in her sleep because it seemed like fun

Btw that was a real story I submitted to her and yes I did detail the scene of how he did it. (Strangling and smothering her with a pillow if you’re curious). I’m surprised she let that slide to begin with but there wasn’t any blood so https://abs.twimg.com/emoji/v2/... draggable="false" alt="👌" title="Ok hand" aria-label="Emoji: Ok hand"> we chillin

This thread is going to incriminate me for some shit in the future I can feel it