Here's my personal feedback: A thread

So, I randomly decided I wanted to write a retelling of Sonic Adventure out of random spontaneous inspiration.

As of this tweet 4 acts were written.
Introductions for Knuckles, Sonic, Tails, and E102, in my interpretation of event order.

As of the 20 pages I've written, I've gotten up to Casinopolis for both Tails and Sonic. Knuckles hasn't appeared sense I wrote my interpretation of his opening cutscene and E102's entire introduction after his first battle with E101.

Give you guys a good idea where I'm at.

I wrote this as adaptation for comic form so events play are differently and altered to remove gamey elements and tell a cohesive story.

As of this thread, I wrote the plot verbatum, give or take, line alterations and the finer details of events changed.

My current big dilemma has been 2 things.

One, I feel I stuck too closely to the script of the game. I did alter a few lines to my liking but for the most part, it feels more like a adaptation then a re-imagining.

Why is this important? See next tweet.

Because, IF I decide to do a comic, my 2nd dilemma will be that I might want to take creative liberties anyways with the art style and not draw on model.

I feel like writing the story as it's written with a different art style from official wouldn't work. here.

So I'm thinking i might have to do major contextualizing events to better fit my own art style and reflect that this is not a simple adaptation or retelling but a alternate universe re-imagining that just so happens to follow events as they played out in main timeline.