I usually start by trying to identify the issue. That's done by marking all the relevant positive/negative spaces. Like bellow.
Then I try to simplify the entire design just because it feels really convoluted at a glance. Simple is better:
After that is done the priority becomes identifying the major spaces that can happen inside the boundaries you defined.
Just mark this with some transparent shapes like bellow:
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