This is hard to say & Im really sorry.

Screenwriters :
I’ve got a great imagination, a ton of reading to do, and very little time.

Skip the beautiful prose!

It takes WAY too much time to read!
I don’t need it anyway!
Save it for your poetry or novel.
Add description! But find 3 strong words to take the place of that paragraph. Trust that you've set a scene without having to describe everything. Let the art director, director, cinematographer get excited imagining what they want! Don't lose story momentum!
Nothing's going to completely block you from succeeding. Just saying - why make it harder for yourself? I'm not some kind of screenwriting law force. A lot of people get frustrated with wordiness. Something to think about. Or not. You do you.
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