I mentioned breaking the rules yesterday. Let’s have a chat about it, #revpit. Buckle up because this is going to be a long one.

People think eds are staid stick-in-the-muds who will try to bend your ms to their draconian will. Not true. We are thrilled to see things that break the mold and love to be surprised by smthg we didn’t think would work (case in point, see tweet about ed loving prologue). #revpit

#revpit BUT, we do want you to know when you are breaking the rules, and make sure you are doing it on purpose, and make sure you know what your reader is thinking at that moment. Let me give an example: