For those considering notes from anyone on here (including me) a few things to think about:

Why are you getting feedback?

What kind of notes do you need?

What kind of support are you looking for right now?

Make sure the person giving notes is on the same page.
Different people bring different experience, qualifications, and sentiments to the table. This has been on my mind since @DannyManus brought up this point in his solid webinar on Wednesday, and it really forced me to examine what I’m can…and can’t provide.
I think what I deliver is an examination of your script with actionable takeaways that can help shore up that story's weaknesses, but also carry with you to future projects. Of everything I do, that’s what I know I can deliver each time.
I pride myself on working with the writer to gain an understanding of what they’re aiming for, and then assist in hitting it. I value a relationship with one writer to another, and I prioritize helping tell the story the writer wants to tell.
What I’m NOT good for:
- development notes
- commercial/marketability notes (I’m skeptical of these in general)
- coverage
- help with pitching
- connecting with producers, managers, investors, talent
- proofreading for typos
This isn’t to say I can’t give opinions on these things, but I’m simply not experienced or qualified in these areas to give meaningful guidance. If you want those I’ve got a list of highly recommended consultants, and I’d be happy to share ‘em with you depending on what you need.
I’m not skeptical of anyone that has experience and delivers value based on that experience, but I am skeptical of anyone that’s delivering outside of their wheelhouse.
Anyway, this kinda turned into a plug for my services, which wasn’t my initial intention (at least not consciously) but the point I want to make is that whether you’re paying for feedback or not, understand not only what you’re receiving, but also why you want it at this time.
Self-examination is key to being a good writer (and person) and that doesn’t stop when you hit FADE OUT.

Examining your feelings and desires around a project as you collaborate with others can guide you. (Yes, I believe feedback is a collaboration.)
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