Thought I& #39;d share once again with you a few of my choice script notes on a script I may (or may not) have once written...
p.2 - Whilst Leonard& #39;s love of gardening is an early indicator of his bucolic character, we feel his use four times of the word "herbaceous" during Jenny& #39;s emergency tracheotomy is over-egging the pudding.
p.5 - Do women still say "fiddle-de-dee" as rebuff to possible male suitors? Might be worth cross-checking re Dr Lendal& #39;s response to Mark& #39;s suggestion they visit the local Go Ape climbing park.
p.8 - we question the use of whale song over Gordon& #39;s motorbike accident. Is it a typo? Did you mean Our Song?
p.12 - This scene feels somewhat redundant in the context of the whole "did they or didn& #39;t they" stag party stand. Unless the Resurrection of Christ sequence is a dream?
Did you mean "Terry Waite"? As in the previous scene Jim talks about dating a driving instructor called "Teri Waite". So assume a typo?