I’ve ditched almost all the «suddenlies» in my first book. I feel so much slimmer.

Which other words should be ditched?

It’s funny so many says ‘that’ because I had not used one single ‘that’ in my first draft, and not until my 20th edit somewhere, did I start thinking I needed to ‘that’ everything https://abs.twimg.com/emoji/v2/... draggable="false" alt="😳" title="Flushed face" aria-label="Emoji: Flushed face"> Logic is kaboom sometimes https://abs.twimg.com/emoji/v2/... draggable="false" alt="😑" title="Expressionless face" aria-label="Emoji: Expressionless face">