Been reading the Luna trilogy, so far it's middling for me because the character roster is too big & every single person is horny, all the time

The sci-fi worldbuilding is pretty well done though, there's plenty of bi/gay representation, but jfc it's offputting when male writers drown the text in tasteless hypersexualization. I love a good sex scene but it's not erotic when every character is constantly talkin bout dicks

actual quotes from this book:
"her fierce little vulva"
"the rosebud of her anus"
"I felt my ovaries tighten"
BAN MEN FROM WRITING SMUT

"He was a big dick-machine (...) a fuck-bandit."

no comment

strong ending, i finally felt engaged like shit got real. maybe it's because that's the only 10 pages in the book with no mention of genitals. 6/10 but i was gifted the sequel so i'll have to keep reading

so i'm reading the sequel and this is only 14 pages in

THIS BOOK CAN'T BE REAL!!! I REFUSE!!! THIS IS A 60 YEAR OLD MAN WRITING THIS

"That dick is a cartoon dick, a manga dick."

when it's been 4 whole pages since you last had an excuse to mention cum