Been reading the Luna trilogy, so far it& #39;s middling for me because the character roster is too big & every single person is horny, all the time
The sci-fi worldbuilding is pretty well done though, there& #39;s plenty of bi/gay representation, but jfc it& #39;s offputting when male writers drown the text in tasteless hypersexualization. I love a good sex scene but it& #39;s not erotic when every character is constantly talkin bout dicks
actual quotes from this book:
"her fierce little vulva"
"the rosebud of her anus"
"I felt my ovaries tighten"
BAN MEN FROM WRITING SMUT
"He was a big dick-machine (...) a fuck-bandit."
no comment
strong ending, i finally felt engaged like shit got real. maybe it& #39;s because that& #39;s the only 10 pages in the book with no mention of genitals. 6/10 but i was gifted the sequel so i& #39;ll have to keep reading
so i& #39;m reading the sequel and this is only 14 pages in
THIS BOOK CAN& #39;T BE REAL!!! I REFUSE!!! THIS IS A 60 YEAR OLD MAN WRITING THIS
"That dick is a cartoon dick, a manga dick."
when it& #39;s been 4 whole pages since you last had an excuse to mention cum
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